I haven't been able to write about Claudette Colvin as I was a judge in the Cybils MG/YA nonfiction category and it was one of the final five choices. I had a few questions about it though that I have not seen addressed elsewhere and I've been waiting for the chance to discuss. I do want to note that none of this came up in the judging discussion and further, that Claudette was not one of our final three books for a variety of other reasons.
I read Claudette very much as a historian and was certainly impressed by author Philip Hoose's research. But the book does not hinge on proving that Claudette challenged the city's busing policy - there is no question that the event occurred nor what followed after her arrest. The book is mostly about Claudette being overlooked, ignored and to a certain degree harshly treated by Civil Rights leaders. Part of what makes it so significant for teen readers is that she was a teen when she was removed from the bus and that as a teen she was apparently determined not to be worthy of the challenge to the busing policy (as Rosa Parks so famously became). It is on this element of the book that I had issues.
There is very much a sense that Claudette was cast aside by Civil Rights leaders. Hoose writes about how harshly she was treated by the police and yet how brave she was to stand up to them - only to have local leaders not rise to support her. He further writes about the fame Rosa Parks gained even though she was not part of the larger court case that came from the busing discrimination. Claudette, of course, was the star witness there. She has a particularly bitter moment where she writes about her struggles and how no one offered to assist her in any way. There is a lot of bitterness in Claudette's story and Hoose does nothing to hide that - and in fact even makes sure that it comes through.
This is clearly the story of a brave girl who stood up to oppression and then was not supported by her community or even remembered by them after the fact.
I believe completely that all the events in Claudette Colvin occurred as Hoose recounts them in his book. It is the nuances - the settlement of blame on others - that gets shaky for the historian in me. All the reasons why Claudette was overlooked by local leaders are left to Claudette to explain. It is her voice that is heard here because everyone else is pretty much absent or dead and didn't leave a paper trail on the subject. When Claudette writes that her classmates blamed her for being pulled off the bus and causing trouble and treated her badly afterward, there is a glaring lack of interviews supporting this claim. You hear only from one male classmate reflecting on the reception to her radically changed hair. Why aren't there more voices from her class - or a statement that none of them would provide an interview? It stikes me as strange that there are not more people to agree with her assessment or refute it and it certainly sounded like she attended a good-sized school. There must have been hundreds of people from her high school to track down for potential interviews. And this was a teenage girl - where are the voices of her girlfriends? That lack of data gave me serious pause. I was expecting several pages, if not an entire chapter from Claudette's contemporaries explaining what it was like in their community in the period after her arrest and how they felt about Rosa Parks being chosen instead of her. Instead, there was basically nothing.
The other issue I had was with her pregnancy. The fact that Claudette became an unwed mother was a big part of why she was apparently deemed too unpredictable to be the face of the bus boycott. Her explanation of that pregnancy - that it was an older young man who took advantage of her, that she had no idea how to even get pregnant, and that he abandoned her, all read as....well, forgive me but it's a story I have heard dozens of times. Every teenage girl I've known in my life who got pregnant always had a variation of the virgin rape story to share. This indeed could be what happened to Claudette but there is no corroborating interviews - no friends or relatives who say yes, she was an innocent who was taken advantage of. There is instead another round of silence. Claudette was a blameless victim yet again.
Finally, I thought it was telling that the one time Martin Luther King came up, she was careful to say how kind he was. Claudette in fact does not say a single negative thing about Rosa Parks either. The two well known, and to a certain degree deified members of the movement, she very carefully has only positive words for, even going so far as to suggest they had nothing to do with the negative way she was treated. Part of me wonders if Claudette - and Hoose - both realized that saying negative things about King and Parks would be a step too far and likely lead to backlash. Everyone else was to blame for what happened to Claudette Colvin, except Dr King, Rosa Parks and Claudette herself.
Again - I am not doubting in any way shape or form the horrible things that happened on the bus that day nor the courage Claudette Colvin exhibited by standing up to the police and later standing up in court. She was clearly an amazing teenager. But I am surprised a narrative that so completely hinges on the memory and perception of one person has gotten such a big pass by reviewers and award committees. Is it so hard to believe that Claudette Colvin was a wild teenager who could not be trusted to act in the manner she needed to in order to affect the positive change needed in the bus boycott? Did she give the movement's leaders honest reasons to believe she was a wild card? Because she is pretty much the only one talking (her lawyer gave only a single bland statement in the book) we'll never know much beyond her side of the story especially as Hoose so clearly embraced it.
That's what I've been wondering about and I'm curious as to why more folks haven't wondered as well.


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February 18
2010
02:47 AM
Interesting. One of the things I admired about the book was the way Colvin was presented as a young headstrong young person, one with which young readers could identify.
I felt that showing why she wasn't the point person for the bus boycott reinforced all the more strongly that Parks' action was planned, not an act of a tired seamstress. Hoose, by putting Colvin in the middle of all of it, bringing all these famous names in by way of her story and voice made the overall movement, to my mind, all the more impressive and all the more accessible to young readers today. To read of Parks as her youth leader and other adults in relationship to her instead of those pure icons I thought humanized them all --- at the right spot for young readers to enter into this piece of history.
That it was completely her story, her point of view worked for me. Bringing in contrary statements specifically about her would make for a different book, one that wouldn't have the intimacy of this one, to my mind. That is, she would have to be moved back, so to speak, so that all voices could be there. A different sort of book from one where her voice is the thread, the emotional center of this particular story.